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Forever 21 | Spring 2022 | MVFW

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Wearables

A Black Bodysuit

A Leafy Bodysuit

A Liquidy Bodysuit

Chcocolaty Heels

Blue Rib Outfit w pants

Flowery overshirt w pants

Denim Palazo

Green Beach outfit w skirt

Liquid pattern dress

Sky blue flair outfit

White Braided Sandals

Checkered Pants

Crew Sun Vibes Flock

Peach Overshirt

Tiled Pants

**White cross top w skirt **

Ripped Jeans

Yellow Tshirt w Overshit

White top w flowery pants

**Black Hoodie **

A Tiled Bodysuit

White top

**Cuban EMB Black **

Cuban AOP Top

EMB Green Top

Painted Cuban Top

White shoes

**Crocet Hat **

Tiled AOP Top

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Hey, will reviw this now

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  1. Looks like all bodysuits have problems with rigging - models are deformed in different places, the shoulderpads float in the air. Below are some examples of problems. They are the same for ALL the bodysuits.


  1. Update the “Hides” category of the Black Hoodie with “Hair”. As of now, hairstyles clip through it’s cape.

  1. Update the Blue Rib Outfit with pants “Hides” category with “Lower body”. As of now, other lower body wearables clip through it.

ALSO this area lacks smooth weight transition

  1. Reduce number of used materials to 2 in Chocolaty Heels.

ALSO, they do not connect very well with ankles.
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  1. Consider finetuning rigging of the Checkered Pants - looks like there is no smooth transition of weights in this area:

  2. Looks like some seams of the Crew Sun Vibes Flock are visible (due to AO bake issues?..)


  3. Consider adding a fixed hairstyle to the Crocet Hat AND updating it’s “Hides” category with “Hair”. As of now, some hairstyles clip through it.

  4. A bake problem on Cuban AOP Top? Both representations.
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ALSO a slight see-through issue on the collar, both representations.
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  1. Cuban EMP Black, a slight see-through issue on the collar, both representations.
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  2. A baking issue on the EMB Green Top? Both representations.

ALSO a small see-through issue here, both representations.

  1. Flowery overshirt with pants - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

ALSO this part lacks smooth weight transitions:

  1. Green beach outfit with skirt - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

  2. Liquid pattern dress - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

ALSO this part lacks smooth weight transition

  1. A bake problem on Painted Cuban Top? Both representations.

ALSO a see through issue on collar, both representations
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  1. Peach overshirt - slight clipping issue here

  2. Consider finetuning rigging of the Checkered Pants - looks like there are problems in these areas:


  1. Sky-blue flair outfit - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

ALSO this part lacks smooth weight transitions

  1. Tiled AOP Top - a small see-through issue on the collar. Both representations.
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  2. Consider finetuning rigging of the Tiled Pants - looks like there is no smooth transition of weights in this area:

  3. Reduce number of used materials to 2 in White Braided Sandals.

ALSO, they do not connect very well with ankles.
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  1. White cross top with skirt - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

ALSO the skirt is solid, legs clip through it, consider finetuning.

  1. White top with flowery pants - consider updating the “Hides” category with “Lower body”. Right now other lower body designs clip through the wearable.

ALSO this part lacks smooth weight transition

  1. Yellow T-shirt with overshift - slight clipping issues on the waist.

Otherwise it’s good to go :slight_smile:

Cheers!

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Another thing - the White Shoes are are just the default avatar shoes with different texture. Such a usage of default items is not allowed, please, replace with another model.

Cheers!

Hey Andreus I am the wearable designer. just some points to make. I repainted the weights of the pants. Here Look


Is this fine

Updates have just been made - the Body suits are designed in this way purposely.

@michi can u please help review this collection.

Hey @enjon808 , I’ll contact @AndreusAs if the delay is much longer~
I’m sure they’ll get to this when they’re online next!

  1. Looks like Cuban AOP Top lacks female representation, this clipping issue on the screen is clearly caused by a male representation being applied to female avatar:

ALOS there is this gap on screenhot. Might be missing polys, or flipped normals.

  1. Painted Cuban Top hides lower body, which is not supposed to be this way, I believe.

  2. Looks like no changes have been made to Ripped Jeans at all.

  3. White braided sandals still have 4 materials and 3 textures, reduce to 2 each maximum.

  4. White cross top with skirt - the skirt is still solid, which leads to such an issue on the screen.

  5. Looks like all the see-through issues (like the one on screenshot) still present on all the collars of all the tops.

ALSO, Tiled AOB Top hides lower body, too, as you can see on this screen.

Don’t forget that you can test wearables in-game via Ropsten testnet before submitting another commit.

Cheers!

All files have been updated and uploaded @AndreusAs

We rushed this all night, and it should be working.

@AndreusAs Thank you so much for the suggestions! We are so excited that everything has been updated.

Almost all fixed now, except some see-through issues. Consider using double-sided materials on ALL Tops to avoid see-throughs on collars (see example below):

Also consider using double-sided materials on ALL bodysuits, some parts of then are not visible from certain angles, see example below. The first screen is frontal - everything looks ok:

The second screen is from another angle, and some parts of the “breastpalate” are not visible due to not using double-sided material. Same goes for the shoulder pads - they are not visible in this example, too.

There still is this strange gap on this wearable:

I’m gonna be online for at least 5 hours now, will approve as soon as you push the fixes.

Cheers!

The Bodysuit see through is not a bug we like it looking like that. It was intentional. And We are Uploading the New Shirts very soon. Please Be online till then. We need to get this approved

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Cheers for all the help!

We just fixed the issues with the shirts. Looks like it’s good to go.

Still no double-sided shader on shirts.

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Please, test wearables in-game before another commit, and make sure all fixes are applied.

Cheers!

Cheers Andreus!

We’re fixing them, and they’ll be uploaded soon.

Thanks for being so thorough in your feedback!

Oh, and the hat - that see through on the latest screen is also to be fixed.

Should be done, crocket hat included.

Looked fine in-game from our end.

Hope we’re good to go!

Collection approved.

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